Monday, July 20, 2009

DREAM

As always he's sitting, there, smiling.
I'm so elated.
I wrap my arms around his neck, gently kiss him on the cheek before greeting him,
"Dad, I have so much to tell you......"
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I get up with a start.....
Its been over ten years since he's been coming to me in my dreams.
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13 comments:

hitch writer said...

dont know wat to say...

i am what i am said...

@hitchwriter: why not??????

Raj said...

I know how it feels...just move on....this is what I have adopted...!!!

Indyeah said...

Some bonds are like this...
a father-daughter one is beautiful and unique..

I felt a little sad at the loss I felt after reading the second part...

beautifully written Gunmeen..
((hugs))))

The Rat... said...

Wow!!!

great one, Meen...i place it among one of the best 55ers

Balvinder Singh said...

Gunmeen, that was really touching. Yes the departed souls do visit us in our dreams.

Anonymous said...

These 55 words beautifully written by you have touched my soul !

i am what i am said...

@raj: true...life is all about moving on


@indyeah: thank you so much
((((hugs)))))

i am what i am said...

@rat:looonnnggg time.....where were u and thank you so much foir you kind words


@Mr Balvinder Singh: thank you sir


@Anonymous: thank you

Aniket said...

One can't critique a piece like this even if one wanted to. Cause it carries such an honest message.

I love your 55ers always. :)

raMmY said...

I can understand how it must have been for you.. and that nothing can replenish your loss. It feels so morbid when the most dearest in our life leaves us. But i guess life is all about reminiscing those times,loving them for what they have been to us, praying for them and cherishing each moment spent with them.

may the force be with you.

rammy

i am what i am said...

@aniket: thank you aniket....i always look forward to your comments


@rammy: just to let you know this is entirely a piece of fiction....it does not bear any similarity to real person or incident....anyways thanks for dropping by the blog...do visit again

The Geekie said...

wow..u write 55 too

too good...keep it up

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