As always he's sitting, there, smiling.
I'm so elated.
I wrap my arms around his neck, gently kiss him on the cheek before greeting him,
"Dad, I have so much to tell you......"
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I get up with a start.....
Its been over ten years since he's been coming to me in my dreams.
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13 comments:
dont know wat to say...
@hitchwriter: why not??????
I know how it feels...just move on....this is what I have adopted...!!!
Some bonds are like this...
a father-daughter one is beautiful and unique..
I felt a little sad at the loss I felt after reading the second part...
beautifully written Gunmeen..
((hugs))))
Wow!!!
great one, Meen...i place it among one of the best 55ers
Gunmeen, that was really touching. Yes the departed souls do visit us in our dreams.
These 55 words beautifully written by you have touched my soul !
@raj: true...life is all about moving on
@indyeah: thank you so much
((((hugs)))))
@rat:looonnnggg time.....where were u and thank you so much foir you kind words
@Mr Balvinder Singh: thank you sir
@Anonymous: thank you
One can't critique a piece like this even if one wanted to. Cause it carries such an honest message.
I love your 55ers always. :)
I can understand how it must have been for you.. and that nothing can replenish your loss. It feels so morbid when the most dearest in our life leaves us. But i guess life is all about reminiscing those times,loving them for what they have been to us, praying for them and cherishing each moment spent with them.
may the force be with you.
rammy
@aniket: thank you aniket....i always look forward to your comments
@rammy: just to let you know this is entirely a piece of fiction....it does not bear any similarity to real person or incident....anyways thanks for dropping by the blog...do visit again
wow..u write 55 too
too good...keep it up
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