Wednesday, March 18, 2009

HUMAN INSTINCTS

In the beginning, there was something called jealousy.

All it did was want.

The pet of it was named greed.

It fed off of jealousy but it was never full.

Jealousy had a cloth that previoulsy covered its left face.

It took it off, and then there was shame, with the distasteful marks that it wanted to hide on its face, waiting to face the truth.

Truth harmed shame, and as it sobbed of pain, it said, “I want to be innocent.”

Jealousy took over and said , “Why can't you ? It isn't fair that others can, is it? One way or another, together, we can acheive.”

Greed kept chewing on jealousy's leg.

Later, from the mix of jealousy ,greed, and shame, came anger,perversion, and embarrasment. And more were to come.

But there was one unlike the others.

That came from shame and greed.

Oddly enough, it was named ...hope.

But in the end, they all wanted.

P.S. I really don't know what I had intended to write. Its a lot of things that were going on in my mind. Its come out as a "khichdi". Maybe I wanted to say a lot of things but ran out of words. I know its a little wierd post but please tell me what you thought about it. I really need a lot of feedback.
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16 comments:

Kislay said...

It is a good "khichdi" , very digestible . :) Kudos .

Kishore Choudhary said...

not like "khichadii" it's a very good post [ you are always impossible ]

Akansha Agrawal said...

Why do you think it's khichdi? It's what you intended it to be, the truth... :)

hitch writer said...

I dont like khichdi... if they make khichdi at home i cook maggi !! lol...

:)

didnt understand so .... ;)

Onthewingsofadream said...

Its some interesting and true observations very well put together by you ...

sometimes our mind is a muddle of so many things that what come out is khichri ..but its yummy ..:-)

Latin Sardar said...

Wasn't too much of a khichdi. If it was anything, I'd call it Paella (spelled pa-ye-ya - that's a spanish khichdi btw and very tasty). lol :)

Latin Sardar said...

Wasn't too much of a khichdi. If it was anything, I'd call it Paella (spelled pa-ye-ya - that's a spanish khichdi btw and very tasty). lol :)

Som said...

The concept of personification was good .. yeah things were a bit muddled but it still made sense ...

Solilo said...

It is not 'kichdi'. It is well thought written piece. Something to ponder over.

i am what i am said...

@kislay: thanks

@kishore: thank you so much

@akansha: yeah true it was intended to be true and hard hitting but somehow i got lost in the process. but thanks for liking it.

i am what i am said...

@hitch writer: yeah me too not fond of khichdi. dats why i did not like what i wrote, but i decided to post coz i wanted to know if others liked iit or not. even i did not understand it after i finished writing it.

@onthewingsofadream: hey thanks yaar for calling it yummy. i'm glad people are appreciating what i intended to write.

i am what i am said...

@latin sardar: thanks yaar also for the name of spanish khichdi. expected from you only.

@som: thanks

@solilo: i'm glad you appreciated it. i'm hopping over to your blog to read about your personality test results.

Balvinder Singh said...

Hi , i am in transit, will be getting back to regular blogging after a few days.

Indian Home Maker said...

Another delightful one! Loved your hopeful khichdi ... can't we all live purely on hope ?
:)

i am what i am said...

@mr balvinder singh: waiting for your comments sir.


@IHM: thank youuuuu sooooo much!!!!!!!was waiting to hear from you.

alok said...

I really don’t think you ran out of words here. I would say, in our life there are so many instances that we really don’t require a word-full of sentences to understand what it is! but just a single word that makes the whole sense out of everything. It’s nothing but a faceoff one more time with life.

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