Monday, March 16, 2009

LOVE - A GIFT

She sat across the room from him, hugging her knees to her chest as she sat on the pillows. With him, yet in another world.
Wrapped in the white fluffy robe he had so lovingly purchased for her on their first night together, she observed yet didn't intrude.
She watched as his fingers slid back and forth across the strings.
One hand gently plucking while the other moved of it's own accord.
The sound was soulful, magical.
His head bent, he studied his movements, lost within the rhythm he alone could hear in his head and his entire body flowed with the creation.
While he didn't know it, this was the true gift she wanted to receive.
To know him like no one else.
Within his own element, in the seclusion of the music room he was not pressured to be what everyone expected him to be, but to just be himself.
This is the way she loved him.
This was the man that had brought about such a change in her life.
They had both gone to such distances to get to each other.
To be just what each other had needed, had longed for forever.
The feeling of comfort and excitement, both flowing at the same time.
To know just what each other desired with a look.
"Just what do you have?" people would ask, and all she could do was smile.
"Was it worth all of the changes?" people would ask, and he would smile back.
No words were needed.

As if reading her thoughts he stilled his hands and looked up at her.
"I love you."
And she smiled.

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14 comments:

Chirag said...

:) Brilliant ending :)

Pinku said...

thats so sweet...blessed are those who have been able to form such relations.

Sagar said...

i loved this post...keep it up.

hitch writer said...

heart warming ! lovely !

i am what i am said...

@chirag: thank you so much. btw i am not there in your blog roll sob sob -:(

@pinku: welcome back. so delighted to receive your comment. thank you.

@sagar: thank you

@hitch writer: thanks a lot. do keep visiting and commenting.

Mithe said...

I loved it Gunmeen-so simple, yet so subtle:)
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Rahul Viswanath said...

Great End .................

Rooney said...

"I am what I am" is the greatest statement ever made. Did you read the book 'I Am That'?. It is the bible on non-duality. You can read the book reviews here:

http://www.amazon.com/I-Am-That-Talks-Nisargadatta/dp/0893860220

i am what i am said...

@mithe: thanks a lot babes. i love your blog too.

@rahul: thanks

@rooney: thanks for visiting. will take a look a the link you sent.

Onthewingsofadream said...

:-) ....
such precious are moments of being with someone you truely love ...

Som said...

Sometimes I feel love is over rated and some times I am myself in the flow ...

But loosing ones identity for any thing is not love... before one can say I love you .. one should know the meaning of the word I ..

Indian Home Maker said...

Loved this! You are good you know! What a simply told story and what a lovely way to end it ...
fabulous!

Dewdrop said...

Very touching and subtle post... Lovely...

timethief said...

I loved this post. Thanks so much for sharing it.

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