"Gone to get dinner, BRB."
But you never did.
The scent on your pillow is spent.
I sleepwalk through days.
I dream most nights.
Cars crash.
Muggers mug.
Hearts stop, not mine.
I put the post-it back on the fridge.
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Tuesday, May 26, 2009
POST-IT
I enter the empty house, picking your post-it from the floor, again.
"Gone to get dinner, BRB."
But you never did.
The scent on your pillow is spent.
I sleepwalk through days.
I dream most nights.
Cars crash.
Muggers mug.
Hearts stop, not mine.
I put the post-it back on the fridge.
Free Signature Generator
"Gone to get dinner, BRB."
But you never did.
The scent on your pillow is spent.
I sleepwalk through days.
I dream most nights.
Cars crash.
Muggers mug.
Hearts stop, not mine.
I put the post-it back on the fridge.
Free Signature Generator
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Sheer Awesomeness!
So much said there.
Goodshow!
Stupendous work, simply outstanding....u've almost mastered the art of creating magic in just 55 words...
@aniket: thank you aniket
@girish: thank you so much girish
55 words and you express so much...the loss, the starkness, the fact that life goes on despite it all....
Beautiful ..
Gunmeen, This is sheer brilliance. This magic of words. One of the best I have read.
the third best 55 words i got, well the first two includes one your and one of KI...truly awesome.
@SGD: thanks. i'm glad you liked it so much.
@solilo: thank you so much solilo. i'm truly touched by your words
@sagar: thank you so much sagar.
Oh my God... gave me goose bumps. Lovely!
@IHM: thank you so much
awesome
55 Fiction at its best!
:)
regards
Pulkit
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
I am following your page too!
:)
tc god bless!
@geekie: thanks
@pulkit: thank you pulkit. i'm glad you liked it.
Wow! sent a shiver! Nice!
@dewdrop: thank you dewdrop. glad you liked it.
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