Friday, April 10, 2009

55 WORD FICTION

Do it.
Do it if you really love me.
He looked longingly at his son, his eyes asking him just one question - Can you see me like this?
Is this right? His mind is in a turmoil.
He looked at his dad again.
In a flash he shut off the ventilator. And walked out.
Relieved.
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12 comments:

Aniket said...

Great one again Gunmeen!

You are not a med student are you?
Just guessing where you get your inspiration from.

Love your 55WF as always. :-D

hitchwriter said...

aaaah !

that is so so painful !

Solilo said...

Gunmeen, Your 55-ers are so painful. It tells so much in so little.

Euthanasia is a scary thought.

Rakesh said...

God Gunmeen! This one's so dark... and so was the previous one.

Heavy stuff.

i am what i am said...

@ to all: thank you all for your comments. i agree i was getting a little over the top with my 55ers. i have tried to tone down my larest one. i hope all of you like it. thank you for taking out time and writing about it.

Jagjit said...

Shattering.

roop said...

hmmm that's heavy emotion. so much in so little. i wish could write 55ers! u do splendid with them. good luck for more. :)

अविनाश said...

nice one gunmeen

i am what i am said...

@jagjit: thank you. the latest one is a lot milder. its quite funny actually. do read it and let me know what you think.


@roop: hey thanks for stopping by my blog. i agree it is heavy duty stuff. the latest one is a lot funnier . let me know if you liked it.

@avinash: welcome back to blogosphere. was actually wondering from quite some time where had you disappeared. great to hear from you. miseed your comments btw. hopping over to your blog right away

Smitha said...

You are so good with these!!! That was so touching...

i am what i am said...

@smitha: thank you so much

SGD said...

Short yet triggers so many thoughts....
euthanasia is so complicated! I really cant say whether I am or against mercy killing.

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