Sunday, April 12, 2009

55 WORD FICTION

“I can’t marry you,” he announced.
“I can’t make this commitment to you when I don’t know who I am,” he continued.
“I need to find myself.”
Unable to believe at first, I started laughing out loud.
“After seven years, I know what you are.”
I finally said taking off the ring,
“You’re an ass.”
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24 comments:

Aniket said...

Whooaaa! Nice to see the lady taking her stand. Good for her!

Nicely done as always.. :-)

i am what i am said...

@aniket: hey thanks yaar. thats the quickest comment i have ever got. thanks a ton.

hitchwriter said...

that one is really really fantastic... and the best I would say...

I dont think this one is sad... this is justice... and conclusive !

Rajesh said...

It sounds great and different

Aniket said...

Well, I am mostly online 18+ hrs a day... so I try to keep up with all the blogs I follow. :-D

Keep up the good work. :P

Pinku said...

why call the ass names??

Those poor things are known for their hardworking nature not ditching.

Jagjit said...

Nice. No, not nice - bold. :) :)

Dewdrop said...

Just Wow!!!

Solilo said...

Ha..ha..ha.. this was lighter. Why poor Ass? Let it be Pig. :D:D

But why dedicated to me, Gunmeen? You don't mean to call me an A$$. :D

i am what i am said...

@dhiren: thanks yaar but i'm a little upset i lost IHM's contest. lack quite a bit of grey cells. LOL!!!!

@rajesh: thank you

i am what i am said...

@pinku:i agree. should have thought of somethin else.

@jagjit: thank you


@dewdrop: thanks a lot

i am what i am said...

@solilo: not at all yaar. i dare not do that. this was far you coz you wrote in my last post that i write very painful 55ers. they are very sad. so when i wrote something funny (out of my comfort zone) i thought i wud dedicate this to you. and i agree i should have written pig. sounds better and even more funnier.

Indian Home Maker said...

Good one!!!

hitchwriter said...

you need not worry about gray cells, you have plenty... maybe you should work on some nice food to send to me.. or something else that can interest me !!! lol....

Now now.... did you call Solilo a or should i say an ASS ????? did you.... reallly ?????

oooops... Dhiren ...

Bhagoooooooooooooooooooooo.....


he he he

hitchwriter said...

where is that comment about solilo... time to get her reaction !!! he he he he he

Smitha said...

That was a really nice 55er!!!

i am what i am said...

@dhiren: now now dhiren. i did not say dat i swear. looks like i've been an ass to actually use the word ass. bawwwwww. solilo plz plz believe me. dhiren ki mat suno. maine kuch bhi nahi kaha. and dhiren if you promise me to declare the winner next time i will send you authentic sarson ka saag and makki ki roti. promise!!!!!!

i am what i am said...

@IHM: thanks

@smitha: thank you so much.

Solilo said...

Gunmeen, Ha..ha..ha..Ignore Dhiren. I will kick his arse. :))))))))

Send Makki di roti aur sarson ka saag my way. Pleaaaaase.

hitchwriter said...

he he he... gunmeen, why are you so scared of solilo !!

ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya... he he he... solilo is a sport !!! he he he....

now i m gone for the good btw.... she's gonna kill me... so lemme gobble the sarson da shaak and makke di roti before she makes it my last meal !!!!

i am what i am said...

@dhiren and solilo: makki di roti andsarson ka saag coming your way.......and dhiren i'm more scared of you rather than solilo. and thank you both for making me smile. you both made my day. i love this blog samaj as dhiren call the blogosphere.

mylifeinrhymingwords said...

so much said with such brevity :)

i am what i am said...

@mylifeinrhymingwords: thank you

SGD said...

A woman with spunk!!! Loved it!!

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